Jimbster's Pokémon Saga - Chapter 3 - Macho Man!

Jimbster: -Sighs- Dont worry guys, we'll win someday.
Umbreon: eon.... (sigh)
Jimbster: Bulbasaur, Return.
-Bulbasaur returns to pokeball-
Jimbster: Lets go to Viridian City
Umbreon: Breon! (Nice)

One hour later
Jimbster: Ooh we're here!
Umbreon: Breon! (Nice)
????: Hello, Wanna battle!
Jimbster: Sure, Whats your name?
Larry: Name's Larry!
Jimbster: One on One!
Larry: Go Machoke!
Machoke: Machoke! (Rar!)
Jimbster whats that?
Pokedex: Machoke, The Fighting Pokémon, Machoke is the evolved form of Machop, It can lift a dump truck with one hand. Using that power, it helps people with heavy jobs. It has more Strength.
Jimbster: Cool! I'll use Umbreon!
Larry: Bad Strategy! Dark types are weak to Fighting types!
Jimbster: Umbreon! Use quick attack!
Machamp: Choke! (Ouch!)
Larry: Hang in there! Use Cross Chop!
Jimbster: Umbreon!!!
-Umbreon avoided the attack-
Jimbster: Great dodge! Cross chop only has 80 Accuracy, Now umbreon, Use Quick attack again!
-Criticial Hit-
Machamp: Choke!
Larry: Machoke! Use Strength Attack
-Machamp's hand glew white and punched Umbreon-
Umbreon: Breeeon!
Jimbster: Oh no! That did some damage!
Umbreon: Ummmmbreon!!!!!!! (NOOO!)
Jimbster: Why is umbreon shooting some Psybeam? Wait! Thats Psychic!
Jimbster: Umbreon! Use Psychic!
Machoke: CHOKE!!!
Larry: nO CHOKE!!!!!!
Jimbster: We win!
Umbreon: Breon!
TO BE CONTINUED

Cool, but theres a mistake in it, you put machamp instead of machoke x3

Sorted it out

Yayz. Good work, Jimb

yeh, good work, tis a nice little epic battle that was goin on there

Yeah. Especially like the part where Machoke gets PWN3D. X3

Yush. You should catch a Magikarp

You would say that, Ricky.

I said that to every story like this one 0: