Mike's Pokémon Journey Episode 1- A New Journey Awaits!

(the scene is a deserted coal mine, in which mysterious men are digging.)

???: Hurry up, Men!
???: But Boss, we're working as fast as we--
???: Silence, 334!
334: Ugh....
???: Now, have you found it yet?
???: No, sir! The Old Keystone has not been found yet!
???: Then KEEP DIGGING!
???: Yes, Saturn!
Saturn: Cyrus will be very displeased if we fail! SO KEEP AT IT!!!


(Mike's bedroom. About 7:59 A.M.)

Alarm Clock: BEEEEEEEEP! BEEEEEEEEEP!
Mike: fRuffflD...? Wuh? Ahhhhhh! 8:00! I'm gonna be late!
Mike: Bye, Mom! I'm going to get my Pokémon!
Mike's Mom: Say Hi to Grandpa Rowan for me!
Mike: I will! Oh yeah, mom! I'm gonna borrow Dragonite so I can get over to Sandgem Town, K?
Mike's Mom: That's fine, dear.
(Mike's Father Enters.)
Mike's Dad: So who're you picking?
Mike: I'm going with Chimchar!
Mike's Dad: Mmmmmmm. Good choice. See, since I grew up in the Hoenn region, my first Pokémon was Treeko!
Mike: Who grew into Sceptile, right?
Mike's Dad: Exactly!
Mike: Well, anyway. I'm off!
Mike's Mom: Oh, Mike! Before you go, Take this!
Mike got a Journal!
Mike got a Parcel!
Mike's Mom: Be sure to deliver that parcel to Grandpa Rowan, OK?
Mike: I got it, I got it. Alright, Dragonite, GO!
Dragonite: Draagggggggg!!!!

END OF PART 1.

Wow! That was Incredible!

Ya, well, people don't like it, I don't think.

i like them

I like it, too

You do?! WOW!

All 3 votes were for yes 0:

Yayz.

I guess some more people saw it but forgot to vote 0:

Yeah. I mean, it's getting popular, I can see that.

In the views.

Yeah, there's only 10 views for htis :I

12 replies, 63 views ._.

Well, apparently, I didn't check it in the past 4 weeks.

LOL. We get a load of views in some topics

I've been gone while all of this story was going on, so this is the first time I saw this topic. I loved it! I especially liked the color-coding sort of thing you did with each person's name. And it looked like a play script, which was also cool.

Another member,Jimbster, is making an story like mikes, too. Its awesome, too

Yeah I saw, I will definitely check it out, too, but I don't seem to have the patience to read stories today. :/ I will eventually read the rest, I promise you.

Nyeh, as you want,its your decision =3