Jimbster Pokémon Saga - Chapter 23 - Evolution for Growlithe and Pikachu? Decider!

Jimbster: Holy Chicken! We're in Celadon city!
Umbreon: Breon! (Yay!)
Jimbster: This city is incredible! There's load of Officer Jenny's!
Officer Jenny: Howdy!
Jimbster: Wow a Game Corner!
Old Lady: WOOOOHOO! I'M A MILLIONARE! IN YOUR FACE BARACK OBAMA!
Barack Obama: Wah.
Jimbster: Hmm! An Department store! I have to check it out.
Umbreon: Breon! (Yay!)
Jimbster: Ahhh! There's a Que,
Umbreon: Breon... (Damn)
Jimbster: Meh! I'm gonna shove in! ehheheehee!
Lady: HEY!
Man: STAY IN LINE!
Boy: YOU SUCK!
Boy 2: WHY DONT YOU WAIT?!
Man: I'LL PUNCH YA IF I COULD.
Woman: Your an disgrace!
Woman 2: YEAH! WE WOMAN SHOULD GIVE YOU A SMACK MATE!
Woman 3: HELL YEAH!
-Enters Department Store-
Jimbster: Woah! This place is huge.
Umbreon: Breon! (Wow!)
Jimbster: Just... Wow!
Lady: Welcome to Celadon City Department Store! Please ask me for any help!
Jimbster: Um.... Where is the Super Potions?
Lady: Floor 2
Jimbster: ok, I'll take the Elevator!
Lady: Uh.. Its only ups-
Jimbster: I'LL TAKE THE ELEVATOR!
Lady: WOAH! Ok.

-Enters Elevator-
Lady in Elevator: Hello, Which room do you want to go to?
Jimbster: Room 2 please.
Lady in Elevator: Uh.... ok.
-Lady pushes button-
Jimbster: Ahhh!
-Crazy music comes on-
Jimbster: WAAH!? What is this?
Lady in Elevator: My favourite Music..
Jimbster: ......Right.....
Umbreon: Breon..... (Seriously?!)
Lady in Elevator: You have now arrived in Floor 2!
Jimbster: Great!

-Leaves Elevator-
Jimbster: Woah! Look at all the Stuff! I need to buy loads!
Shop Owner: How can I help you?
Jimbster: 50 SUPER POTIONS PLEASE!
Shop Owner: Um.... That'll be 10,000 Pounds.
Jimbster: .....I thought it was Japanese money....
Shop Owner: PAY ME NOW KID!
Jimbster: Uh......... Look over there! ITS MISTY!
Shop Owner: Ooh! I like a bit of misty!
Jimbster: RUN AWAY!

-Enters Floor 3-
Jimbster: What do we have here?
Shop Owner Floor 3: Hello!
Jimbster: Hi, What do you sell?
Shop Owner Floor 3: Evolution Items.
Jimbster: Evolution Items?
Shop Owner Floor 3: There used to evolve your Pokémon, Fire Stones can be used for Growlithe, Eeevee and Vulpix, Thunder Stones are used for Pikachu and also Eeevee.
Jimbster: Cool!
Shop Owner Floor 3: Just remember though, If you evolve them, They can never go back.
Jimbster: I'll take a Fire Stone and a Thunder Stone please!
Shop Owner Floor 3: £10 please!
Jimbster: Here you go!
Shop Owner Floor 3: Thank you come again!
Jimbster: Growlithe Pikachu! Come On out!
-Pokeball fly in the air-
Pikachu: Pikachu! (Hello!)
Growlithe: Growl! (Woof! hello!)
Jimbster: Alright you two, I have found a way to make you stronger! TaDa! A Thunder Stone and Fire Stone
Growlithe: Growl? (No!)
Pikachu: Pikachu! (No!)
Jimbster: Cmon guys! Your evolving! Your gonna be strong!
Growlithe: Growl growl growl! (And I told you no!)
Pikachu: Pikachu! (Yeah!)
Umbreon: Breon. (I wouldn't force them)
Jimbster: WHY WONT YOU EVOLVE? YOU'LL GET STRONGER!
Growlithe: Growl......... (I thought you loved me)
Pikachu: Pikachu!!!! (Your selfish!)
-Growlithe and Pikachu run away!-
Jimbster: Hey get back here!

-Meanwhile-
???: Sir! Our preparations are ready!
????: Good! Get ready to take over the Game Corner!
???: Yes Sir!
????: Soon the Game Corner will be mine!

-Jimbster leaves Department Store-
Jimbster: Growlithe! PIKACHU!!!! WHERE ARE YOU?!
Officer Jenny: Whats the Problem?!
Jimbster: I've lost my Growlithe and Pikachu!
Officer Jenny: Do you mean this Growlithe and Pikachu?
Jimbster: Yes, Them. Thanks.
Officer Jenny: Anyway come back to the PokeCenter with me, Your Pokémon need rest.

-Meanwhile-
???: Sir! We are currently studying about the Rare Pokémon you have!
????: Excellent! We will soon control its powers!
???: Gigigigigigity!
????: Dont laugh like that.

-Meanwhile in the Pokémon Center....-
Nurse Joy: I'll heal your Pokémon right away!
Officer Jenny: Why did they run away from you?
Jimbster: I wanted them to evolve but... They didnt and I got upset.
Officer Jenny: Your a disgrace to Pokémon!
Jimbster: Huh?
Officer Jenny: You cant force them to evolve! They have feelings and choices to! There the one's who want to help you but you got to let them have decisions in there life!
Jimbster: ..Your.... right.
Officer Jenny: Pokémon Battling is all about Strategy and Bonding, With the Right mind and Bonding, You can actually work out your attacks better! Having more confidence and better Battle Strategy, Pokémon arent just tools, There living creatures.
Jimbster: I know... I'm sorry.
Nurse Joy: She's right Jimbster. Pokémon are very tough to get as friends. These two love you. They just want you to understand.
Jimbster: Well I need to think about it.....
Nurse Joy: As I was saying , Your Pokémon are now fully healed and have full HP and full PP, Also I hope you understand what Jenny just said.
Jimbster: Ok.
Growlithe: Growl... (Sigh)
Pikachu: Pikachu. (Hmm)
Jimbster: Guys, I'm really sorry. I didnt mean to be selfish to you! I love you guys alot! I dont want to lose you as friends! I want us to keep growing and get stronger!
Umbreon: Breon. (Good)
Jimbster: You see, I wanted us to get stronger, But now I realise, We dont need to evolve to get Stronger, We can still be stronger through our bond and friendship!
Growlithe: Growl...... (Sniff) -Cries-
Pikachu: Pikachu.... (Wahh) -Cries-
Umbreon: Breon... (Great!)
Jimbster: Oh come here all of you!
Pikachu: Pikachu! (Hello!)
Growlithe: Growlithe! (Woohoo!)
Umbreon: UMBREON! (Wait for me!)
-All Jump on Jimbster-
Jimbster: Ahh thanks guys! Stop it! hahhaha!
Nurse Joy: Thats cool, Just like that other trainer.
Officer Jenny: Yeah, Him and his Pikachu.....

-Meanwhile-
???: Sir! We have found a Power booster to boost our Pokémon's Power!
????: Exccellent! We will begin invading the Game Corner right away!
???: Yes sir!
?????: I'll rule the world soon! Mwahhhahaha!

Wow, that was extremely long.

Indeed

A long fail.

I find it funny that more people like it but there is only 2 People that hate it.

Nope..Dont see any one liking it.

Really?
Ricky, Mike, Rayquaza Fan and KeronForce seem to like it.

Nope, they didn't say they liked it.They just posted here.

They do actually like reading it.

Ask them.

I like reading it Jimb